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DNEmangekyo

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Title says it:

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I'm not good myself but I have to say that the proportions are off by quite a bit, the bandana....and why does he have white pants on, isn't the robe supposed to go all the way down?


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DNEmangekyo

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It's not white pants, look at some pics of Itachi in akatsuki clothes, then I guess you'll see what it is. Anyway it's not easy to make on such a small base.

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DNEmangekyo

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And how is the bandana off-place? It has to be a bit above the eyes, so I kept 1 pixel space between the eyes and the bandana...

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The base is more than large enough to make a decent sprite of Itachi.

1. the hair is off in shape a little, revise that some.

2. Shade more. Darker outlines, lighter insides.

3. Use better colors, the robe is much too dark.


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DNEmangekyo

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Are you serious? Did you ever notice that the Akatsuki robe is dark? And I used dark outlines, and lighter inside. Really....

I do agree on the hair though. But the rest...

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im rubbish at spriting, especially clothes, but the clothes on itatchi arn't that bad, they slightly resemble the images of akatsuki clothes

the hair on the otherhand...could be better

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DNEmangekyo

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Thanks, and yeh the hair blows =) but I think the robe looks fine. But I see opinions differ.

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I would take Tydon critique very seriously if I were you, and I said the PROPORTION of the bandana is off. It seems too big.

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im sure the clouds dont have white outlineing

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DNEmangekyo

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I'm a bit color blind xd what do you think it is then? it sure looks atleast very light. Pink? Light blue? Grey?

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i dont know what your talking about

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DNEmangekyo

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kenpachi wrote:im sure the clouds dont have white outlineing

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Actually, it is a white outlining. But for the sake of spriting, it would be more gray. It's not like he did anything wrong with the clouds. Just needs a little more color shading lol.


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DNEmangekyo

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Thanks, ill fix the hair and bandana later. And again sorry for taking the critique a bit wrong. Keep up the good work.

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It's fine.


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